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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 04:47 am · Chapter: Volume I

O o o o o , a murder mystery.  Excellent!

Now that's a refreshing change of pace amoung all the 'teen angst' ones on this site.

And 'starring'  Draco a one of the 'good guys'.

H m m m , I think I smell a rat, though.  Someone wants Draco either taken down a peg or gotten rid of all together.

Why? I don't have a clue !. . get it, mystery . . clue.

Well, anyway, you'll have to post more so we can find out!

HINT! HINT! HINT!

HE!HE!HE!



Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 06:48 am · Chapter: Volume I
Having Draco in a line of work like Magical Law Enforcement is quite interesting. I would not have thought Pansy would marry a man in the people's service. You have a very different take on Draco's personality as well. He is very loving in this, unlike his selfish arrogance of the stories. But, this is very well written and intriguing. You write a good description of his study and the nighttime check on his son. I wonder why he uses electricity in his house, being a pure blood married to the same? Good chapter, though. The writing is nicely done.


Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 07/09/2008 06:41 pm · Chapter: Volume I

Oooh... I love the intrigue and suspense.  I'm not sure that Draco or Blaise are totally in character in this, neither of them seem quite smug enough yet (maybe we'll see more of that to come), but I think you've done well with the descriptions of them. 

You've got me curious to see who killed the Unspeakable, and why.



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