Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: emLILYEVANS (Signed) · Date: 02/07/2009 03:53 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

man i wish i could pee my name an a fence but unfotunatle im a girl....if only

anyways i loved the story :)

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 17/08/2008 11:40 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

That was funny, insightful, funny, adorable, funny, precious, funny,well thought out, funny and I really liked it.

Oh, and it was funny. . .did I mention that?

HE!HE!HE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 06/06/2008 07:05 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Okay, this is now my new favorite one-shot of yours. I loved it. I loved the image of Fred falling asleep next to George and them just doing everything together. It was adorable. I also cannot get the thought of Charlie peeing his name against the fence out of my head. lol.. I love it! I loved this whole story and I guess you're the perfect person to write a story about twins. I can definitely see Fred wondering about this all.. it's so sad to think about what happened after the war. :( But I loved this story - great job with it! Too cute!

Author's Response: I might have used my brother and my nephew as inspiration for Charlie there hehe.... My brother used to have peeing contests with his friends, to see who got the most distance, when he was a kid. And now his son will invite you go to pee on the fence with him at my mother's house ("c'mon, Auntie Megan, let's go pee against the fence!"). I try to explain to him that Auntie Megan can't do that, but he's 5 and male and therefore knows everything. Thanks for the review!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 02/06/2008 01:58 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

hehehe...I play "whack-a-mole" with my girls at bedtime, too. Every time they pop up out of bed I put them back in, lol. I loved the line with about the mirror. Freddie wondering what his brothers saw when they looked in it. I don't know that it ever occurred to me that twins might not realize they were looking at themselves and not their twin, lol. Another sweet piece, Megan.

Author's Response: I've been having to separate mine lately, when my husband's out of town. I give them half an hour to behave and go to sleep, then one of them has to go sleep on the couch (and I put him in bed once he's asleep). They hate that, they like to cuddle at night. It's been only recently that my boys have been interested in the mirror, and that's mostly Dom (he likes to look at his handsomeness). They get photos of themselves confused too. Chris thinks every photo is of "buh" (brother). Thanks for the review babe!

Name: serendip (Signed) · Date: 15/05/2008 01:55 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww! That was SO sweet! I was just 'awwing'(I can't think of another word and I'm tired, :P) the whole time. Awww!!!!
Freddie and Georgie are SO cute! Especially as little 3 year olds who can't understand. And they you wrote it? Marvellous! (I sincerely hope you meant for it to sound as if you were little, or talking to someone little...)
That was simply adorable.

Ali

Author's Response: lol. Yes, it was meant to be a 3yo internal voice type of style. I might have an advantage on writing the three year old identical twin boys, since I'm a mom to a set of them. I did leave out the headbutting though. Thanks!

Name: potterverse (Signed) · Date: 26/04/2008 08:16 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

What a sweet, touching story. I don't have twins, but I have two little boys and you write about motherhood very realistically. I found the concept of being a twin very interesting and I really liked your descriptions and explainations. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have two little boys also, they'll be 4 in September, so 3 year old identical twin boys wasn't a big stretch for me haha. The indifference toward mirrors and throwing the clothes around their room are pretty much directly from my boys. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, thank you for reviewing!

Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 24/04/2008 07:13 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww... this is so cute! All the cute, little things they do just make me laugh! I love how they want to pee on gnomes and throw clothes all around their room. It seems like something little kids that age definitely would want to do... The way you portray Fred's thoughts over being a twin is just great and so in-character!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I tried for realism, little boys are kind of disgusting combined with a death wish haha. Thanks!

Name: fhestia (Signed) · Date: 11/04/2008 08:13 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

What an endearing little story. You made me laugh, especially at the mental image of the twins trying to pee on the garden gnomes, and I also teared up a bit at the close relationship between Fred and George and the realization of what happens in Book 7. I'm still so angry at JKR over that. You did a marvelous job of capturing a slice of life in the Weasley home. I enjoyed it so much! (ReallyGinny at EHPF)

Author's Response: I know, I'm so sad that Fred died too. It's not fair. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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