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Name: datbenik513 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/2009 02:37 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

This must have been one of the best-kept secrets in the Universe, seeing that I managed to skip this story until now.

What we have here is a wonderful, very literately written love story, placing the reader into just the right setting. 

Things are wonderful, life is beautiful, then, things, several things go awfully wrong in an unfortunate chain of events.  Brilliant one-shot, wonderful imagery throughout. Perfect grammar, simply a lust for the eye.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!



Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 13/05/2008 08:52 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this! I had forgotten about Nick's little ballad, so reading this was a good reminder. I think you fit the pieces of the puzzle together in a very interesting way. Poor Nick, not doing that spell right at a VERY crucial moment. I think you very skilfully show him becoming a ghost to be with Lorelei and yet having to move on because she moved on... I guess I will never look at him the same way again. I always think of him as a comical figure, but this story makes me feel more sympathetic to him ...



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